Procumbens Opinions

Forum for discussion of Pines, Junipers, Cedar etc as bonsai.
User avatar
Rod
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 169
Joined: June 28th, 2009, 9:45 am
Favorite Species: Wide range
Bonsai Age: 20
Bonsai Club: Bonsai Society of Qld
Location: Queensland

Procumbens Opinions

Post by Rod »

G`day I am posting this Procumbens Juniper for some opinions. I think the foliage on the lower left side should be raised a little, what do you think?

Cheers
Rod
RS juniper rsz.jpg
You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
User avatar
dayne
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 657
Joined: July 16th, 2009, 8:42 pm
Favorite Species: juniper, pine
Bonsai Age: 0
Bonsai Club: sunshine coast
Location: sunshine coast

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by dayne »

good to see you back on here a bit rod i think so it will show the movement of the trunk alot better may be even lose it all together
User avatar
Rod
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 169
Joined: June 28th, 2009, 9:45 am
Favorite Species: Wide range
Bonsai Age: 20
Bonsai Club: Bonsai Society of Qld
Location: Queensland

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Rod »

That thought had entered my mind too Dayne it great direction to that side. It may be best to do a virt and see what it looks like . Thanks dayne
User avatar
Jamie
Bonsai passionardo
Bonsai passionardo
Posts: 6829
Joined: August 21st, 2009, 8:08 pm
Favorite Species: CLERO!!!,ficus, celtis, juniper, elms
Bonsai Age: 9
Bonsai Club: AUSBONSAI.COM
Location: queensland, Hervey Bay
Been thanked: 2 times
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Jamie »

gday Rod :D

great to see ya back on again, even better your starting to play with ya trees again too! have you thought about moving that branch out to the left more? i think that would possibly be better than moving it up as it will show the trunk more and keep the tree in shape, i dont think it should be removed, in saying that a jin would work well there too!

i love this tree, one of my favs of yours mate.

jamie :D
SHOHIN YAKUZA!!!
:twisted: taking the top half of trees of since 2005! :twisted:
and growing trees for the future generations! 50+ year plans :D
User avatar
kcpoole
Perpetual Learner
Perpetual Learner
Posts: 12292
Joined: November 12th, 2008, 4:02 pm
Favorite Species: Maple
Bonsai Age: 15
Bonsai Club: the School Of Bonsai
Location: Western Sydney, NSW, Australia
Has thanked: 19 times
Been thanked: 96 times
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by kcpoole »

Maybe lower all the branches on the left so they drop away from the trunk, and then I would even consider removing the ones on the inside of the bend, on the right

Ken

Edit: added a quick virt without the inside branches
You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
Last edited by kcpoole on June 5th, 2010, 6:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Check out our Wiki for awesome bonsai information www.ausbonsai.com.au/wiki
What is Bonsai? http://www.ausbonsai.com.au/wiki/index.php?title=Bonsai
What should I do now? http://www.ausbonsai.com.au/wiki/index.php?title=Newbie
How do I grow a Bonsai? http://www.ausbonsai.com.au/wiki/index. ... _a_Bonsai?
Visit a Bonsai nursery to see some real nice trees http://www.ausbonsai.com.au/wiki/index. ... _Nurseries
User avatar
ozzy
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 608
Joined: November 21st, 2008, 5:51 pm
Bonsai Age: 15
Location: SA

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by ozzy »

Virt with branch removed ...
You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
User avatar
Glenda
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 980
Joined: January 10th, 2010, 12:44 pm
Favorite Species: Ficus, Swamp Cypress, Bouganvillea,
Bonsai Age: 2
Bonsai Club: Mackay Bonsai Club
Location: Mackay, Qld
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Glenda »

JMHO but I like it better with the branch on the left still there.

Glenda
"Knowledge is not a heavy thing to carry around" - JB Taylor (my father)
"The more you learn the more you earn" - JB Taylor
"There are exceptions to every rule, but to be an exception, you must first be exceptional" - Me
User avatar
Rod
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 169
Joined: June 28th, 2009, 9:45 am
Favorite Species: Wide range
Bonsai Age: 20
Bonsai Club: Bonsai Society of Qld
Location: Queensland

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Rod »

Thanks guys I just did some virts aswell and I could be swaying towards removing some from the right side
RS juniper rszv rhs.jpg
RS juniper rszv lhs.jpg
You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
User avatar
Jamie
Bonsai passionardo
Bonsai passionardo
Posts: 6829
Joined: August 21st, 2009, 8:08 pm
Favorite Species: CLERO!!!,ficus, celtis, juniper, elms
Bonsai Age: 9
Bonsai Club: AUSBONSAI.COM
Location: queensland, Hervey Bay
Been thanked: 2 times
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Jamie »

nice virts every one :)

Rod, i like what ya have done with the removal of the branches on the right.

jamie :D
SHOHIN YAKUZA!!!
:twisted: taking the top half of trees of since 2005! :twisted:
and growing trees for the future generations! 50+ year plans :D
User avatar
Bretts
Bonsai Philosopher
Bonsai Philosopher
Posts: 6671
Joined: November 14th, 2008, 11:04 pm
Favorite Species: carpinus jbp
Bonsai Age: 12
Location: Jervis Bay NSW
Has thanked: 1 time
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Bretts »

Hi Rod
Nice tree. I am with Ken that it is the right side that needs working. I consider not removing the branch on the right but lowering it and then shortening it!

Edit quick look at your first virt may be close to what i was thinking.
It's too bad your in such a hurry cause the stories I could tell you, Bushels and baskets of stories, hole crates full of stories. But if you can spare a moment I will tell you one story.
User avatar
blkrota
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 163
Joined: March 12th, 2010, 11:50 pm
Favorite Species: Pines and Juniper
Location: Sydney
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by blkrota »

Hi Rod, The first vert you did does it for me, Very nice work.
User avatar
Bretts
Bonsai Philosopher
Bonsai Philosopher
Posts: 6671
Joined: November 14th, 2008, 11:04 pm
Favorite Species: carpinus jbp
Bonsai Age: 12
Location: Jervis Bay NSW
Has thanked: 1 time
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Bretts »

Looking at bringing that right branch down it would probably be too much like a bar branch. Is it possible to replace this branch from one of the ones above. That way it would have a branch structure that makes sense with the apex and also leave the pad about the same spot it is now!
It's too bad your in such a hurry cause the stories I could tell you, Bushels and baskets of stories, hole crates full of stories. But if you can spare a moment I will tell you one story.
User avatar
Rod
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 169
Joined: June 28th, 2009, 9:45 am
Favorite Species: Wide range
Bonsai Age: 20
Bonsai Club: Bonsai Society of Qld
Location: Queensland

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Rod »

Thanks for the input guys I am definitely swaying toward the removing some foliage on the right . looking at the virts with that side removed I think highlights the jin and shari more, it also looks more balanced. I`m pleased to see this tree doing well. I grew it from a cutting about 18 yrs ago, and I used it in a workshop with Robert Steven in 2006 Cheers Rod
User avatar
Chris Sirre
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 230
Joined: May 6th, 2010, 7:33 am
Favorite Species: Junipers,Elms,Trident Maples,Pines,Natives
Bonsai Age: 24
Bonsai Club: Yarra Valley Bonsai Society
Location: Mount Evelyn,Australia
Contact:

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Chris Sirre »

Rod wrote:Thanks for the input guys I am definitely swaying toward the removing some foliage on the right . looking at the virts with that side removed I think highlights the jin and shari more, it also looks more balanced. I`m pleased to see this tree doing well. I grew it from a cutting about 18 yrs ago, and I used it in a workshop with Robert Steven in 2006 Cheers Rod
Hi Rod, good choice. Because the trunk moves to the right you don't want to take any branches of on the left.You need that counter balance. The virt with the branhes removed on the right looks great. Love to see a pic when you're finished restyling it.

Chris
User avatar
Mojo Moyogi
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Aussie Bonsai Fan
Posts: 1656
Joined: May 5th, 2009, 11:26 am
Favorite Species: Maple, Elm, Hornbeam, Pine, Larch and Cedar
Bonsai Age: 29
Bonsai Club: Yarra Valley Bonsai Society
Location: Yarra Ranges, VIC
Been thanked: 1 time

Re: Procumbens Opinions

Post by Mojo Moyogi »

Hi Rod, this is a pleasant tree. I prefer your first virt, but I am distracted by the origin of both the left and right lower branches. While not exactly bar branches, they are horizontally opposite one another. Perhaps if you could mask where one branch exits the trunk, this would improve the appearance of the tree.

Cheers,
Mojo
...Might as well face it, I'm addicted to Shohin...

"Any creative work can be roughly broken down into three components- design, technique and materials. Good design can carry poor technique and materials but no amount of expertise and beautiful materials can save poor design". Andrew McPherson - Furniture designer and artist
Post Reply

Return to “Pines and Junipers”