I've been eyeing this tree a lot lately. I haven't been satisfied with it, but wasn't sure how to fix it. Tonight was the night, and I'm not sure if it was the best plan, but it's done now. I decided the two things that were really bugging me were #1: the size of the tree - while technically okay for the contest, it just
feels too big for a shohin; and #2: the cascade was boring, and lacked significant interesting movement. Both of these problems could be solved by either bending the snot out of it, or just cutting it off. I did a little of both.
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There are still two branches on the bent section, but I'm not sure if I even want to keep it at this point (they're covered up with a paper towel in the last photo). It may end up as a jin. It may not even survive, so I'll have to wait and see. Right now it's serving as a bending experiment, and also as extra foliage to hopefully keep what I want from reverting to juvenile foliage.
After the bend, I ended up feeling like I was looking at the back of the tree, so I've now flipped it. The wiring will give some good basic shape, and hopefully set the structure for the tree to grow into. It will need a better, more complete wiring job before the deadline.
I feel like I might still have too much foliage - should I cut it back a bit more to try to bring it in closer to the trunk/pot? Please feel free to comment on that or really any aspect of the tree/work. I feel like I'm headed in the right direction and getting better with junipers, but I've got a lot to learn.

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